Monday, February 19, 2007

"while i lay, i'd dream we're better, scales were gone and faces lighter."

- Jars of Clay

I think it's become an informal tradition for me to post a poem on a Sunday. It's certainly not one that I mind, at least not for now. We will see if I continue posting poems post-Orvieto, or, I suppose, even whether I continue blogging post-Orvieto. I love Louise Gluck a lot; she was one of the first poets I ever really found. I say that, but I certainly haven't finished the finding process yet. In re-reading her book The Wild Iris last semester (a full year and a half after I was first introduced to it), I found out that all of my favorite poems are also, among other things, pretty blatantly related to sex. So I'm a little self-conscious posting them now (as much because of my failure to realize that particular dimension for so long as anything else I suppose). But I think "Vespers" is a fairly safe poem, and a very good one for a Sunday:

Vespers

I don't wonder where you are anymore.
You're in the garden; you're where John is,
in the dirt, abstracted, holding his green trowel.
This is how he gardens: fifteen minutes of intense effort,
fifteen minutes of ecstatic contemplation. Sometimes
I work beside him, doing the shade chores,
weeding, thinning the lettuces; sometimes I watch
from the porch near the upper garden until twilight makes
lamps of the first lilies: all this time,
peace never leaves him. But it rushes through me,
not as sustenance the flower holds,
but like bright light through the bare tree.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I'm glad I'm not the only one who, secretly or not-so-secretly, enjoys erotic poetry. :) Maybe we could secretively exchange names of favourite poets...

Mackenzie said...

haha. I've not been secret at all about the poets that I like, or about how some of them are super sketchy. Let's say that I don't particularly enjoy erotic poetry - poetry which is erotic for eroticism's sake - but if they happen to include sex as part of some larger message, I'm OK with that. I mean, sex is clearly a part of married life so a married poet couldn't very well censor all of that....

Anonymous said...

Yeah, I should probably clarify by saying that erotic-for-eroticism's sake is also NOT what I was meaning... (some of Walt Whitman for example... UBER-SKETCHY!!!) but poems that have found love/sexual love a gateway into discovery of self, eternal truths, or both. :) Rilke has some nice ones. John Donne, too, obviously. And Catullus... although I must admit some of his are pretty much just about sex, insofar as any poem can be "just" about anything.

And I love you and I'm glad you're loving Italy. :) A lot glad you're loving Italy. And I think the freaking-out-ness is normal. :)